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Thursday 28 August, 2008
 20:46 | 10/Sep/2007 |  12 Comment(s)
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Flames - Part 2

Fiery red, yellow outrage

Screaming orange sets the stage

Adamant black's elated to ravage

So vivid… aching for a rampage

 

Coupled with others of its kind

what follows blows my mind

emotions caged and put behind

sheer arrogance heaving with pride

 

On the pyre – so wild, yet hollow

Angry movements, ready to swallow

world  appears oh! so shallow

unmoved by anyone’s sorrow

 

Equal treatment, stale or fresh

half chewed bones and undigested flesh

engulfing all – gawky or dainty

need woods to feed..was that not plenty?

 

 

I know this (funeral) isn't a rosy subject so I am not surprised that so many of my frnz are complaining why did I write something like this....I consider it to be an acheivement even if it upsets the reader. That to me means that I have managed to depict my subject as vividly as I precieved it and nothing can be more complimenting, than a creative piece evoking the same feelings in the writer as well as the reader.

 

I knew before posting that this was grose! Lets see what makes - Flame Part 3!!

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