Fiery red, yellow outrage
Screaming orange sets the stage
Adamant black's elated to ravage
So vivid… aching for a rampage
Coupled with others of its kind
what follows blows my mind
emotions caged and put behind
sheer arrogance heaving with pride
On the pyre – so wild, yet hollow
Angry movements, ready to swallow
world appears oh! so shallow
unmoved by anyone’s sorrow
Equal treatment, stale or fresh
half chewed bones and undigested flesh
engulfing all – gawky or dainty
need woods to feed..was that not plenty?
I know this (funeral) isn't a rosy subject so I am not surprised that so many of my frnz are complaining why did I write something like this....I consider it to be an acheivement even if it upsets the reader. That to me means that I have managed to depict my subject as vividly as I precieved it and nothing can be more complimenting, than a creative piece evoking the same feelings in the writer as well as the reader.
I knew before posting that this was grose! Lets see what makes - Flame Part 3!!